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Really good second chapter, the action was exciting, there was a lot of emotion and I think this sets up the rest of the story really well. I'll keep reading for sure.

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Jan 12Liked by Nick Richards

Oof, emotional and exciting looking forward to the next chapter.

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Oh well done. You’ve been on my to read list and I’m glad I’ve kept going!

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Thank you so much. I’ve always loved the phrase I came up with to end that chapter.

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Ouch, it's never easy to deal with loss, this chapter had it all; courage, dragon and loss. Nice work.

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